You're Beautiful

A sight for my eyes

You’re beautiful

 

I’ll never find a word to describe

Nor explain the emotion I felt

When I first saw you

And even now

My heart skips a beat

With the thought

Of you

Running through

All the time

In side of my mind

Only you

Everyday when I see you

I search for those words

That defines

These heartfelt feelings

I have for you

Still

I’m at a lost

On how to say

You’re beautiful.

 

By Mauricio Montoya

 

Author's Note

Something I put together for a girl I just met.

Reviews

[tender2dtouch]

You just surprised me; I thought this poem was about your past love. I just now read it was for a girl you just met. Lucky girl! Nice to know you fell in love once again. Something I didn't think was possible in the midst of heartbreak.

Great poem and nice work!

Good luck with your new love . . .

[emmajoy]

Beautiful! I hope the girl you just met feeds your mind and heart with yet more inspiration.

'Running through .. All the time .. In side of my mind' - keep that feeling safe, tis special.

[Tia Sanchez]

Your simple lines could threaten to melt any girl's heart. This was sweet.

[Dream Catcher]

I really like this piece, this emotion is a strong one and you express more than perfect in this! It's very easy to relate with! You're a fantastic writer and please keep up the good work! 5 stars! Cheers mate!

[J.Black]

Your words are beautiful.

[betty]

A beautiful poem wrote through the mirror of the soul

[Daydreamer54]

wow, this was very sweet and... beautiful! Great poem! :)

[just rose.]

It's so hard to say the simplest things sometimes ... when we are overwhelmed by the wonder of all that we feel. But you do so incredibly well here. Just beautiful!!

[An Ordinary Woman]

Lovely, new friend. I don't think you need any input- it's beautiful just like it is. It sounds like it could be love. Smiles ...

I enjoyed very much!

[StarryeyedGirl]

Beauty comes as much from the mind as from the eye. Excellent writing, love how you put it together, i'm sure the girl would love it =)

[Hope Wilson]

i like this peice it shows exactly how i feel and how many others feel about someone in there life and expresses true emotion