Those Eyes

 

Those Eyes

Those wonderful eyes have me sinking.

Along with that smile, I can't stop thinking.

I'm at a lost for words, as a sure bet.

cause there isn't enough letters in the alphabet.

yet, no matter how I try.

I can not hide,

Nor forget,

That smile,

Along with those,

beautiful eyes.

 

By Mauricio Montoya

Author's Note

something I wrote for a friend

Reviews

[YouoweYoupay]

Eyes are not just eyes to the soul, they can be windows to a beautiful place out of this world, that is if that person you're gazing at is close to you, and from what I can read, the person described here must be very close, and very special. Simple words, with warm effects. Thanks for sharing.

[J. J. Nightingale]

SOUNDS LIKE LOVE ... SWEET ..

JASMINE ..

[MOON]

Sometimes you dont have to say a thing the eyes says it all. Beautiful tribute.

[Erin]

this is a very sweet poem!

[Poetic Beauty]

this is so sweet and sentimental. You have clearly conveyed your thoughts and the emotions are so wonderful. The flow is nicely done.

[Misty Blue Eyes]

aww those eyes can say so much and do so many things to us....i have a poem called these Eyes you should go check it out

[Tate Morgan]

I think ees are the tell tale windows from which we view the soul I liked this i like straight direct profound write s

[Alicia Schroeder]

What a delightful peice, eye's show the doorway's to many unseen places. Great write

[Louise]

My friend Mauricio. I miss seeing you in the library. Again, I am absolutely honored by your words. Forever my friend. I hope all is well with you. Can't wait to read more. God Bless

[ecto521]

A beautiful poem... fine work sir.

[joe shmo]

A Smile aday keeps the blues away :) Good poem!