Time

never stop moving

Time,

Moving through all dimension,

Ever sending,

Never ending,

Stop watch and you will see.

Time, ever bending,

Always moving, years behind,

Like light it will disappear

Only to reappear, so bright.

Now descending,

Shooting across the sky,

Blinded, by the naked eye.

Time.

By Mauricio Montoya

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Ron]

Like time rolling by when jumping trains, hours of grinding rail stock and dust and danger! Yet it is true we are all pea size in comparison to time who sees us all off in the end. The Earth too! Time will tick by and watch when the sun explodes. All those images implanted by this little poem in the true jaunty Montoya style. Hope the residents of Mauricio's new township see what a gem they have.

[Abhijit aka The Lucky U..]

Time , ever bending .. this line is my favorite .. I do not know if you know it or not , there is also a very scientific significance to it .

[Lovely Lady]

Wonderfully scripted and sculpted, Mauricio! May the poetic flow continue to rain down on you! Always~
lovely♥lady~

[lynn]

Really nice piece!

[Rick Puetter]

Dear Mauricio,

As a physicist, I could try to fix the physics of this piece, but that would be wrong-headed, as this is about the human perception of time, and not about "physical time", which is something else entirely. And regarding "human time", you have captured that in such a whimsical, light, and gossamer manner, that I really must salute you. Extremely well done, my friend. Loved the piece. Very high marks!

I have read a few other of your pieces. This is one of my favorites.

My very best regards,

Rick

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Time slips away or flies or busiest away for sure...We need to capture each second and live it for sure..Enjoyed reading your work..I am glad that you took time to read and comment on my work "Emergency Room"..We have spent some time there over the years and now it is not what it used to be..Sunflower..

[Denise]

Wow this is wonderful concept of time...time is relative. Very good poem

[howlfjdks]

Time is hard when times are tough. That's when time seems to matter most.
Otherwise, if you are happy it flies by!
You can buy everything in this world but the one thing you can't buy back
is time.

[SpitfireGrrrl]

Fantastic write! Time is the one thing we're always trying to control, and we never will. Love the imagery!

[Mason]

It's beautiful and so true. Time is so merciless yet so free. This piece flows like a river

[cassandra violet]

"Just something I put together" I am envious of this ability haha. It can take me hours to put together something half as good as this.