I Wonder

I Wonder

 

 

I travel a world I don't know.

As I stand on a rock,

My view,

A vast open sea.

How far must I reach?

To obtain infinity

Day by day,

I've walk across these rocks,

In my view,

 All I can see,

 Is, 

Vast open land,

No matter how close I get,

The distance always seems an eternity

But as night descends I pray for light,

As I lay on the rock I've walk with,

One thing I know for sure.

 My heart will always be home.

 

By Mauricio Montoya

 

Reviews

[Shante Payne]

Its crazy how you can be doing the same thing everyday hustling you know and you still dont reach your goals. Some may say that you're never satisfied with life yet its that greed that keeps us going and no matter how far you get, you never forget where you came from (that's just my take on this)...great write, I enjoyed reading

[joe shmo]

awesome poem mauricio!

[lamia]

short but , to the point ! very good !!

[Cynthia]

I love it so much!
Of course, everyone will love it!
This is a very deep write with lots of feelings

[Rain (YouoweYoupay)]

I didn't like it, I loved it. It was such a deep, serene write...thank you so much. a hundred.

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Great expressive work...Good to know that you love home..Be it ever so humble there is not place like home..Sara

[roarke]

A far reaching and far seeing poem. I think I've been walking on those same rocks. There is no better place for the heart, but home. Mauricio, you are very "in touch" with this poem. Thanks for sharing.

[Amit Parmessur]

You write well.
I often browse the site here looking for talented voices, for the new magazine Golden Apple, of which I am one of the editors.

If you wish to be published in our future issues have a look at us:

http://goldenappleezine.blogspot.com/2010/10/submissions.html

We publish mostly poems and very short stories. There are no restrictions on style and subject matter as long as nothing offends.

Regards

[cassandra violet]

I've never thought of my heart being my home, I've always been a fanatic appreciator of nature, however, after reading this i'm now pondering in thought, wondering if this mentality will really bring me happiness...

[imagination101]

A great poem written from the heart on something special to you HOME! very nice poem!

[Stefanie Leona Baylee]

beautiful poem so full of meaning... thank you for sharing!