My Love for Her

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My Love for Her

 

My emotions for you are strong,

I’m drawn.

Propelled without sight,

 Love is blind,

A loss for words fills my mind.

All I can think is of you.

I wish, I pray, I yearn.

But I’m not sure.

If I can sustain the void,

   If only part of you

Then maybe,

My heart would fill with joy.

A casual conversation,

With the exchange of smiles,

 A laugh,

I cry

 Just to have your the presence

Of your inner beauty

I’m buried

I can’t lie,

Overwhelmed

With a desire some call love.

But my delema

Is You

so near,

Yet afar

Always full of life,

But,

I will wait with all my might,

For now

,until that day

What I was unable to convey.

When you’re ready

With all my earnest strength,

I will  say

 I love you.

 

By Mauricio Montoya

 

Reviews

[Mockingbird]

expresses love from afar. seems she has feelings for you too but is just not ready. this is a beautiful poem.

[Rani Turton]

Unspoken love, but felt so strongly. I liked the absolute simplicity of the lines.

[JanieB]

Nicely written. Lovely, and romantic.

[Abhijit aka The Lucky U..]

Very nice write my friend .. strong emotions .. best of all .. some of the abrupt endings .. feels like falling of a cliff ..
good work !!

[Ashley]

i loved it. waiting for her to be ready, the emotion of having your feelings hidden to yourself for the time being were conveyed excellently. very romantically written.

[Sukriti Suki]

I like how you describe unrequited love without going dark...this still has hope. Enjoying your work!

[Saki!]

A very sweet, beautiful, emotion piece.

[Shante Payne]

Oh it is every girls dream to have a man feel this way about her (so I believe). This is beautiful and it melts my heart.

[howlfjdks]

Tender heart.

[Sheila Kline]

Oh, she just has to LOVE this write of such wonderful emotions!!
A nice poem just brimming with thoughts of tenderness and devotion!!