My Love for Her

mi linda amor

My Love for Her

 

My emotions 

so strong,

I’m drawn.

Propelled, 

without sight.

 Love is blind,

A loss of words,

from an empty mind.

All I can think,

is of you.

I wish, 

I pray, 

and even yearn.

But 

I’m not sure.

If I can sustain
  a stillborn void,

I laugh,

I cry,

If not all of it.

Hopefully,

a casual conversation,

and occasionally,

exchanges of smiles.

then some of you

if not all,

your inner beauty

 That fills 

a heart with joy.

 a gift 

comes in your presence

I’m buried

I can’t lie,

Overwhelmed

With a desire 

some call  puppy love,

love ai first sight

that's my dilemma

but You

so near,

Yet afar.

maybe just a dream

Always full of life,

But,

here comes the sun

 with all my might,

gone is night

For now

we have light

its a new day

I was unable to convey.

because I'm sill in a daze

With my earnest strength,

as i wonder, 

was it a dream.

I have to say

if it was true

through,

that mighty hue,

an abstract view, 

 of you.

if it were true,

would I love you.

 

 

Author's Note

i wrote this a long time ago its a lot of women I've know anyway enjoy and thank you for reading

Reviews

[Mockingbird]

expresses love from afar. seems she has feelings for you too but is just not ready. this is a beautiful poem.

[Rani Turton]

Unspoken love, but felt so strongly. I liked the absolute simplicity of the lines.

[JanieB]

Nicely written. Lovely, and romantic.

Very nice write my friend .. strong emotions .. best of all .. some of the abrupt endings .. feels like falling of a cliff ..
good work !!

[Ashley]

i loved it. waiting for her to be ready, the emotion of having your feelings hidden to yourself for the time being were conveyed excellently. very romantically written.

[Sukriti Suki]

I like how you describe unrequited love without going dark...this still has hope. Enjoying your work!

[Saki!]

A very sweet, beautiful, emotion piece.

[Shante Payne]

Oh it is every girls dream to have a man feel this way about her (so I believe). This is beautiful and it melts my heart.

[howlfjdks]

Tender heart.

[Sheila Kline]

Oh, she just has to LOVE this write of such wonderful emotions!!
A nice poem just brimming with thoughts of tenderness and devotion!!