Broken Heart

Broken Heart

A Poem by Mauricio Montoya
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A love I can"t have

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Broke heart

 

Can I fix a broken heart?

How many times can I mend it?

I don’t even know where to start.

Scattered are the pieces around me,

Should I get on my knees to pick them?

I wonder for the need to cease it.

If there is no love,

Then why retrieve it.

For all and all,

I’ll just leave it.


By Mauricio Montoya



 

 

 

 

 


© 2011 Mauricio Montoya



Author's Note

Mauricio Montoya
I know it just simply yet it’s how I feel I’ve been going back and forth with this one girl who I truly love yet I can’t reach her heart.
Your input would be greatly appreciated. Thank you

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Awww its sad, some of us feel like this when were in love with someone and they quite don't feel the same way... love is unpredictable, no one is an expert on love, even those who think they are because they have taken a college degree on it, still don't have a clue.. you do what you do best, be there for her if she like's it or not, you cant force someone to love you but it doesn't stop you being a friend!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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A very beautiful, but sad at the same time. I have someone I love and he loves me; yet his friend loves me to, but I don't think I will have the same feelings of love for him as the other guy. It's heartbreaking & heart wrenching to feel this way or to have someone who doesn't return the love you want. In time will her feelings grow deeper for you, God only knows. But like you I will let the pieces lie where they fall, and hope for the best.

Posted 4 Years Ago


WOW .. SEEMS LIKE YOU WOULD HAVE YOUR HEART STOP , IF YOU DO NOT HAVE LOVE ... "SHOULD I GET ON MY KNEES TO PICK THEM" .. NO .. LOVE IS NOT WORTH BEGGING FOR .. .. OR MAYBE IT IS .. ..

JUST MY TAKE ON YOUR WORDS ... JAZZY

Posted 5 Years Ago


absolutely wonderful. I love the simplicity and the questions asked to the reader. Love is such an abstract thing that we can never know if it exists in real or not...though in our hearts it always will!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The simplicity of thoughts in a comparison to a broken heart...nice work on this expression through poetry...



Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is sad but it is also nice so keep up the awesome work good job

Posted 6 Years Ago


Oh the ancient question that we poets try to answer and have absolutely no idea. Wonderful piece Mauricio

Posted 6 Years Ago


Aww a broken heart can almost always be mended if we want it to be and if there is enough time. It may still have a few pins holes but those are memories that we hold dear.

Posted 6 Years Ago


unfortunately - we all experience a broken heart - it is part of life. we lose loved ones to death; to another person or just grow apart....it is the hardest lesson of life to keep a loving heart when the pieces are spread as well as the pain...there's no clear cut answer - the healing of love is an art.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Ron
I like the grip of realism that is remoulding the feelings of grief in Mauricio's lost love. It is good that he sees the sense of letting go as wisdom conquers passion. Funny thing is that many girls who turn down such honest uncomplicated love end up regretting they did so bitterly. Lovely poem that is a lesson to the myriads of broken hearted.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Oh Mauricio, I love it. I think this would be so beautiful as a song.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Love to draw and cook from time to time, when I'm not drawing I’ll write poems. My favorite poet is Edgar Allen Poe. more..

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