Another Day

Another Day

A Poem by Mauricio Montoya

just another day


Another Day


I rather sit on the TV and watch the couch

Lie on a newspaper and read the world

 Remain awake and dream away 
Stand  at a bus stop and flag a plane

 train my thoughts,

For another day.

Before night falls

I say good bye


close my eyes

When morning calls

 By Mauricio Montoya


© 2013 Mauricio Montoya

Author's Note

Mauricio Montoya
I'm not sure about this one but a friend of mine came out with the first line when we were messing with the remote so I wrote around it, input is appreciated thanks

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Mauricio your words are fill with lives wisdom
You captured another day has pass by
I specially like the stanza about
Lie on a newspaper and read the world
This words say to me,the news don't tell the true story
You expressed this very creative
Brilliant Hugssss :)

Posted 7 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


This one had me laughing, most papers print yuk nowadays. Valentine

Posted 2 Years Ago

Fun to let your thoughts loose like this one building to the next, like the cars on your train, then your at the caboose.

Posted 6 Years Ago

I love the topsy turvy herein, super write

Posted 6 Years Ago

This poem narrates what a man who uses his time well does. I can relate to it very well because I prefer reading newspapers and while on a long ride on a bus I read a book. " I train my thoughts and plan my day..." because Time is a commodity that can never be retrieved.

Posted 6 Years Ago

This is so different and yet such a story told.

Posted 6 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this.. Thinking outside the box is always great..

Posted 6 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It is absolutely brilliant! I smiled the whole time I read it and still thought how profound yur message is. Just wonderful. You and friend should collaborate more. Let the friend do the first line. Your writing around it is bright and refreshing!

Posted 6 Years Ago

The lament of us all in the new world order we watch and listen to our daily spoon feeding from the government.,And a man feels so small in comparison to the corporations that run us

Posted 6 Years Ago

Beautifully said love, the world and day passes us by if we do not notice it! :) xoxo

Posted 7 Years Ago

I like you outlook on the world.

Posted 7 Years Ago

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Added on November 25, 2011
Last Updated on April 12, 2013


Mauricio Montoya
Mauricio Montoya

Petaluma, CA

Love to draw and cook from time to time, when I'm not drawing I’ll write poems. My favorite poet is Edgar Allen Poe. more..


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