Spiritual awaken

Spiritual awaken

A Poem by Mauricio Montoya
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Spiritual Awaken

 

I look, I see

Even when the clouds spread gray

Vision of the sky enter me

I pray

Realizing what I feel

Is all around me

Out in the open, sometimes hidden

Yet I know you’re there

I’ve been lifted to believe

That I can climb those mountains

And pass the clouds

For on that day

I will say, my lord

Now

 I can truly see.

 

By Mauricio Montoya

 

 

 


© 2012 Mauricio Montoya



Author's Note

Mauricio Montoya
When I pray I know to whom but I have this habit of looking towards the sky so I wrote this, remember poetry is always open to interpretation so I leave it to the reader.

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Congratulations this poem has been "approved" for publication in...

THE MAGICAL MYTHICAL MYSTERY COMPENDIUM.
-Metaphysical, Mystical & Fantastical Poetry of the Arcane

By John Phoenix Hutchinson and Others. (c) 2012

Please feel free to submit other poems as you are not limited to one entry. Also please write a short "bio" about yourself and send to me via private message. This will be published along with your poem. Thanks J.P.H.

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Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Many times I too look up as I feel God is way up there somewhere. Thank you. Valentine

Posted 1 Year Ago


I love and understand this poem. Your good words took me to good places. We must open our eyes and appreciate the beauty of life near. Thank you Mauricio for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


`was blind but now I see` ;the song Amazing Grace comes to mind ....a spiritual and inspirational piece
beautifully expressed and well written...

Posted 3 Years Ago


Praying is a personal painting
thank you for sharing yours
like your title choice much
inspiration behind the words you have written
thank you again lovely read

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes, right now we see only through a mirror dimly.. one day all the darkness will change to light. Thank you for lifting my spirit, my dear friend.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Mauricio, your verse is indeed such a beautiful prayer. I especially like the second line- realizing what I feel is all around me... insight is the best sight to have.

Posted 4 Years Ago


To look at the sky is to see the vastness that can hold promise :) I think your words are beautifully woven :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Congratulations this poem has been "approved" for publication in...

THE MAGICAL MYTHICAL MYSTERY COMPENDIUM.
-Metaphysical, Mystical & Fantastical Poetry of the Arcane

By John Phoenix Hutchinson and Others. (c) 2012

Please feel free to submit other poems as you are not limited to one entry. Also please write a short "bio" about yourself and send to me via private message. This will be published along with your poem. Thanks J.P.H.

Anyone wanting to make Submissions to this Writers Cafe "e" book Project can do so on my group page, the deadline is 1st of November 2012.


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

YES IGOT THE FIRST MESSAGE THANK YOU FOR THE KIND WORDS YOU ARE AMAZING AND YOU BETTER KEEP IN TOUCH OR ILL GET THE WATER(HOSE) LOL J/K!! WHEN YOU GET A PHONE YOUR GOING TO HAVE TO CALL ME!!(:

Posted 5 Years Ago


OKAY I READ THIS AND I LOVE IT. I ACTUALLY HAVE READ A FEW OF YOU POEMS AND YOU ARE AMAZING!! THIS ISNT LETTING ME REPLY BACK TO YOUR MESSAGE ON MY PHONE. THANK YOU MAURICIO FOR BEING SUCHAN INSPIRATION. I HAVE BEEN THINKING OF YOU SINCE WE LAST SAW EACH OTHER AND WAS BUMMED NOT TO SAY BYE. GOOD LUCK ON YOUR JOURNEY AND I HOPE TOOO SE YOU SOON. AND I AM PRTE ON FACE BOOK SO YOU HAVE TO LOOK UP MY FRIEND CRYSTAL GENTA AND IM ON THE PEOPLE SHES RELATED TO UNDER CHASTITY LOPEZ!!(:

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Mauricio Montoya
Mauricio Montoya

Petaluma, CA



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Love to draw and cook from time to time, when I'm not drawing I’ll write poems. My favorite poet is Edgar Allen Poe. more..

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