Beautiful Sunset

Bittersweet farewells. Find the joy in every goodbye.

Beautiful Sunset

 

 

 

A beautiful sunset

What a beautiful sunset

 

Ignore all your sorrows

hold back your tears

your soul may despair

but it's a beautiful sunset

 

do not fear the ends

the pain of farewell

try to take in

this beautiful sunset

 

our life is like earth

going through its seasons

moving on its own terms

to its beautiful sunset

 

although it may seem so

it never happens too soon

things always will end

at their beautiful sunset

 

what a glorious day

so hard to let go

but just try to enjoy

this beautiful sunset

 

sunrise

Author's Note

So this is my second shot at poetry and I think it is, somehow, worse than my first. Regression!
Anyways here it is! have at it! advice is welcome :)

Reviews

[Kevin Horsley]

I did prefer your first poem, but this is not bad.
Repetition of a phrase adds strength to a poem and this is no exception.
Some small spelling errors - last stanza - glorious for example.

Again, flows fairly well. With a little more time the kinks can be ironed out.

[*skittlez*]

0mg i l0ve this q0em it is s0 cute l0l keeq uq the writing

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

I like it, flows so well, a good poem indeed. Keep writing poems:)

Yas

[gothicchica]

i lllllllllllooooooovvvvvvvveeeeeeeedddddddd it love you love your poems keep sending me requets for short stuff byyyyyyyyyyyeeeeeeeee peace out homedgs love ya timothy i mighta spelled it wrong

[Becky C Strukamp]

Such a real good feel good Poem. I love it!

[*[_Natasha_]*]

regression? i dont think so. i found this to be wonderful and beautiful. nice job,once again Tj :)

[MAC]

if this is your worst effort then you my friend have no worries regarding your talent. simple yet beautiful. did you revise this since first posting? because it seems very solid.

[Aiden V]

Honestly...didn't like this one much

[Canicus]

not bad. so true but when the sunsets it must rise again. nice write

[Cherrie Palmer]

poetry is helping the reader find an emotion and see a new light. It takes you to a place that you (the reader) might not be willing to go to with any other format. A good poem makes you think and or feel a great poem does both.
I think you have done a great job here.

[NeonWolves]

Beautiful. The image is vivid and amazing. It flows very well and there are not many errors. With those few fixed, it would be even more fantasitc. Great job.