Character

Character

A Story by TJ

In the beginning, he pleaded for his life.

 

Now, he begs for his death.

 

Abraham said, "If you want to test a man's character, give him power.”

 

I say, if you want to test a man's character, give him pain.

© 2011 TJ


Author's Note

TJ
this is been bouncing around in my head for about a week now. i tried to let it fester until i came up with more to write, but it was giving me a headache.

to be continued...maybe?

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This has definitely been bouncing around in your head for a reason! Very creepy and as others have said, very chilling. You should really keep going with this, see where it takes you. Can't wait to read the character that you create who thinks along these lines, very scary. You definitely have something here, go with it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.



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This definately has potential for greatness or disappointment. Do it justice.

Posted 12 Years Ago


lol this is true good write

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This has definitely been bouncing around in your head for a reason! Very creepy and as others have said, very chilling. You should really keep going with this, see where it takes you. Can't wait to read the character that you create who thinks along these lines, very scary. You definitely have something here, go with it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Wow, a great start to a damn chilling story, in fact it stands alone powerfully as is. Brilliant brevity. This hits home to me in a different way, I've been through a lot, shot, stabbed, badly beaten by theives several times, broke my back twice, I live with extreme chronic pains, but me keep a-smiling and a-moving along. Thankful to be walking and lucky to be alive. Looking forward to reading the rest if you continue. Thanks for sharing. David

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, that was a pretty powerful punch in just a few lines! It seems like a great place to start a story, a dark and riveting story of Character. Nice job :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


A little scary...haha but I imagine that's what you were going for so good job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this a lot and it does require a lot more. This could be the little piece which opens a chapter or the prologue.

Posted 12 Years Ago


More? Please?


Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What you have so far draws you in and makes you want more. Can't wait for the rest.

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I say, if you want to test a man's character, give him love

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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TJ
TJ

Virginia Beach, VA



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