5 Haikus

Just a game of words

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Your comfort moves me
blankets of words cover me
my heart finds soothing

enchanted moments
resting in your fantasies
finding peace in you

ectasy presents
beating hearts racing in tune
melodic heaven

 

 

 

 

tiny ripples dance
raindrops lightly make impact
showering the earth

 

bending and bowing
each branch recieves it's ovation
the wind claps loudly

 

Author's Note

This was from a challange.

Reviews

[Michael X]

you are visually artistic, and your work is a creative experience which draws upon
the contemplative, the vibrant colors are enchanting, sculpted into the landscape
of your passionate form, the flow is immediately subtle, soothing, gentle, whispered
upon the readers heart, written as a reflection of true romance in essence, soul
beauty, ascending, metaphysical, as you hold the moment captivated, a mesmorizing
scene of dreaming, to metaphorically kiss upon winds of desire, everytime i read this i
feel something new and your words hold the brilliant aspect to where it makes the
reader feel as if you were talking about them, the scenery is alive, with absolute
hypnotic charm, overshadowed by pastel loveliness, a poetical portrait design of love,
the ambience brings about the feelings that are described with sensual magic, mike

[Mr. Deft Diction]

So pretty. So spring. So full of that good ol' refreshing fluidity of your movement.

Thank you for this!

[The Lovely Sound Of Cra..]

So you do Haiku's too? That's awesome.

Really loving each of them. Romantic and passionate. Each filled with their own beautiful and unique words.

"tiny ripples dance
raindrops lightly make impact
showering the earth"

This one stood out the most to me. I could really visualize it and you depicted a beautiful scenery in just a couple of words. Keep up the awesome work.

[forfila]

So light in its manner, words that dance with love, I adore it. You really do have my attention =)

[Choosing Life]

This first haiku is so you Mike and your ablilty to make the words touch beyond the flesh..

Your comfort moves me
blankets of words cover me
my heart finds soothing


You make words your own and then you make them love and caress your reader...

Almost as if you are casting a spell but it has to be more than that because there is no illusion in the beauty you present. You make words penetrate even the deepest morsel of one's being... That alone makes you a Master of the Pen. I could go on and on but then really there isn't enough I could say to explain how you just took my breath away...

*sighs*

[Choosing Life]

Thank you Gabe....

I am trying to add some material..

[The Archangel Gabriel]

Very nice. I like the way that you grouped 5 of these into one posting.

Very serene and introspective.

Glad to see you up and running again. Great job!

-Gabe