Just A Stone

Just A Stone

A Poem by Choosing Life
"

Love crushes obstacles

"

 

Building a future
Under the Sun
 Our work isn't done
For we have just begun
 And under your touch
 I find meaning
Stretching beyond fractured
Till I find us completed
Brilliance becomes the envelope
And we develop
the negatives left  in the dark
Till we become light shining
And my balance is held in the cleft of your chin
Your hands working out our tomorrows
I grow closer to you
And mountains become our playground

© 2008 Choosing Life


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You have some great lines here, wonderful imagery. I like this especially, "Brilliance becomes the envelope
And we develop..." Thanks for a great read.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nice. Here is to a future with somebody instead of just being all alone. Wonderfully penned.

-Gabe


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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