That Night

That Night

A Poem by Choosing Life

 

 
The night my soul died
The wind beat upon my house
And entered in through unseen cracks
I felt it raise the hairs on my neck
And I shivered within me
Feeling a cold I had never known
Then your voice said goodbye
And I knew why
My soul did die

© 2008 Choosing Life


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The wind beat upon my houseAnd entered in through unseen ...love that line, the death of the soul, happening that night, very to the point, and I like that.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Seems sad Choosing Life.

It is very well written, I love the lines "I felt it raise the hairs on my neck
And I shivered within me"

beautifully put.

Love
Me

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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