In My Head

In my head
there came a knock
a huge black cloud
known as PAIN
cracking and thunderin'
to get in...

gettin' over my heart and soul
suffocating that yellow sunshine
with such dark memory
known as PAST...

until suddenly it melts,
started to drop and drop...
...and drop...
slowly fallen like rain.

I don't know why
but that knockin' stopped ...
..turned into beats of the drum.

Rain is a violin singing ..
..makin' me FLOAT
....STARE
....LISTEN
...and SMILE..



and there was you...
........
..............I mean LIFE.

-musicfunk-  

         

Author's Note

..probably a product of happy memories,
just being glad discovering things
...start appreciating life and you'll see =]

Reviews

[PaperLife]

You have a very delicate way with words that's very in depth and amazing. They're like soft petals from springtime playing across a sketchbook patterned with all of life's up and downs. Your words are deep, passionate. And amazing. This is beautiful and your talent shines through brightly. It takes me around and back to the past and into the future. You have a way with your words that makes sense. That is solid and beautiful. I love it

[CHRIS ANDES]

thanks a lot =]

[ForeverNever]

I like the incorporation of pictures:)
But your words are so powerful, I love:
"a huge black cloud
known as PAIN"...and how you use colors to describe everything :3

[Barbara Walker]

It's amazing how different things can look depending on perspective!

[CHRIS ANDES]

yes, and depending upon the reader :)

[Healing Star]

I don't know why
but that knockin' stopped ...
..turned into beats of the drum.

What this says to me it is your Heart winning out over your mind.
Does that make sense to you?
The drum to the Native American is the heart, it is the heart beat, it is what connects us to our true self.
So the pain was in your mind, where the memories of the Past live. But you can
let it go through your Heart, your heart can heal your mind. And in your Heart your true memories exist, they are the ones not bound by time or past. In your heart is all your answers and all your healing, all your good medicine.

[CHRIS ANDES]

yes indeed
true :)
thanks for the review

[Darkening Shadow]

I totally agree. Picture works well with the poem. Great Write!

[CHRIS ANDES]

thank you :)

[Annabelle Lee]

how very inspirational and romantic. I do believe this makes me want to dance in the rain. and sing from the rooftops. a happy poem indeed

[CHRIS ANDES]

it is :)

[sheila.j]

I love how this starts out in a dark mood but then changes into something hopeful and just wonderful :)

[CHRIS ANDES]

thanks for the review :)

[Jon Roggie]

Always appreciate life, even the dark times. Nice write.

[CHRIS ANDES]

your right
thank you :)

[Calibaster]

This is really good! I love how you write! :)

[CHRIS ANDES]

merci Al :)

[Calibaster]

votre accueil mon ami. :)

[CHRIS ANDES]

wow,I never thought you know french
haha :)

[CHRIS ANDES]

merci beaucoup :)

[Calibaster]

:) :) :)

[GorgEOus NiGhtMarE]

I loved the last two stanzas :3 great write!

[CHRIS ANDES]

thanks
it's the best part actually
=]

[Sasha]

Great little poem. Speaks so much about how people take their lives for granted.

[CHRIS ANDES]

thanks matt =]