don't fall inlove with a dreamer

don't fall inlove with a dreamer

A Poem by christine zapanta andes
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for she shall be forever floating
in a rabbit-hole of daydreaming
with the hope of clearest sky,
hides a shadow vast as mountain,
that drizzle rain of long-ago,

in your never-ending chance of waiting,
but sshh! calm down and sit awhile,
here she comes with a sparkling smile.




© 2015 christine zapanta andes



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christine zapanta andes
irony of oneself

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I love these line.

"but sshh! calm down and sit awhile,
here she comes with a sparkling smile."

Very moving. Great poem. :D

Posted 1 Year Ago


christine zapanta andes

1 Year Ago

thank you for the review..
I really like this, sentences rhyme like that it's enjoyable to read. =)

Posted 1 Year Ago


I wish I had a she with a sparkling smile and an irony of herself. A great poem. Thanks for sharing......

Posted 2 Years Ago


christine zapanta andes

2 Years Ago

haha. and thanks for the review my friend :)
we are all dreamers... you must be to write...

Posted 2 Years Ago


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There is always beauty in the not so strained poetry and liken this one here i would love to read over and over again. When i first read the title, i was anticipating to find the normal type of heartbreak poetry but i bow to this. Amazing write.

Posted 2 Years Ago


christine zapanta andes

2 Years Ago

thank you sir
Beautiful and a little sad.
Very well played!

Posted 2 Years Ago


christine zapanta andes

2 Years Ago

thanks for the review
Bluefire

2 Years Ago

No problem
I can only imagine the secrets that lie behind those eyes.
Crystal clear vivid imagery is all I saw.

Posted 2 Years Ago


christine zapanta andes

2 Years Ago

thanks for the review
I agree but a person with a sparkling smile and joy in their walk. Tempt the observer.
"in your never-ending chance of waiting,
but sshh! calm down and sit awhile,
here she comes with a sparkling smile."
Above lines. Perfect closing to the poetry. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote



Posted 2 Years Ago


christine zapanta andes

2 Years Ago

thank you sir for the review :)
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome.

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