"Krizie Love"

..to my little one =]

I once have my li'l pet kitty that I often called Krizie,
with my tender hugs and kisses, for me she was a baby,
no wonder I was addicted over her sweetness that lingered,
her paws caressed my soul encircling her furry tail around.

Yet her young world wasn't a forever,
teardrops have fallen for a long time without her with me,
the warmth of her love suddenly shivered numbly,
her heart was stolen away as my blue skies turned to gray.

she was gone alone, leaving home and me,
now my hopes were dyin', believing she'll come back no more,
my heart was broken as I cursed the day she left,
but still I keep holdin' on her memories that living.

her untimely affection brought new life within her,
her youthful mind could not fully understand,
how this worldly love she knew made her feel so blue,
a moral was reckoned over her twisted ways.

And now I was satisfied with my new Krizie,
now that she became more gentle and sound,
with her two little p***y by her side,
fervour of a new love aroused her to be better.

Reviews

[Heromen Selena]

awww! I have too lost a dear cat that was just as close as you described. Beautiful.

[CHRIS ANDES]

yeah it really hurts
thanks
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[Layla J Omorose]

Pets quickly become more like our children or best friend. Since I have my own animal and have lost animals as well I understand. Good work

[CHRIS ANDES]

you're right
thank you
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[Tomislav Petricevic]

That's so sweet! And a bit sad. But cats absolutely rule!
Good job. :)

[CHRIS ANDES]

t.y
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[Fréyjä Helv..]

I love cats too... I mean I'm crazy about cats. The affection they give us are heartwarming. Nice poem... :)

[CHRIS ANDES]

thanks a lot vittoria
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[Marie]

Oh that's very sweet. I love this poem, because I have 3 cats of my own. Little Krizie sounds so cute and loveable.

[CHRIS ANDES]

yes it is
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[Maan]

Excellent poem, I love the idea, I loved the flow, I loved the feelings reflecting by your words. Though I never have a kittie to be with, but I can still feel you through your poem which is beautifully expressed. :) It sounded sweet and simple, very polite and loving, captivating from the very starting line. Great work, keep writing and keep sharing. :)

[CHRIS ANDES]

thank you maan
=]

[realmwriter]

Kitties always make me happy just as this poem made me happy, even if a little sad when Krizie was gone. Well done.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Nice write... emotion.

[Gene Hiccup]

nice tin! love it! more writings pleease!

[CHRIS ANDES]

inspired by true experience.....