Nightwish

life is unconditional

 

Nightwish

 

To little twilights twirlin’ that’s full of mirth,

To Mr. Moon please do have pity

Ye’ all heavenly prosecutors lend me an ear,

For my lost hope hath come to an end.

 

My heart’s solely livin’

Drowned to be afraid of breakin’

The fragile self was captivated,

To spent the night with my last prayer.

 

Into my mind I was reminded

 I need a friend, a companion, a fellow

Unconsciously need not my intuition

To choose the most I desire to live with.

 

A tear had fallen seem unbended

‘hope these words to be unbroken

Unfold my heart with a precious wish,

Lingered the longing to have a brother.

Reviews

[mandy]

very nice,,keep it up.. good work

[Maroon Surreal]

I love poems that shows night stuff. Well done!
"Unfold my heart with a precious wish". Liked that quote :)

[Alex Vidmar]

Wow, beautiful. Also gotta say, Nightwish is a great band. But I love the poem nonetheless. :) Keep em up.

[astronaut]

I typed in Nigthwish. I am glad. :P
I like the rhythm to this and it gives me a celtic-y feel.

[Moonwind Belmont]

NIGHTWISH- one of the bands we cover hehhehehehe

[The old me]

very wonderful.

[Sir Robert Robbie Lord ..]

don't won't move out the way or say or laugh or even smile yes just to be meaning
and then forget it you're impossible that was really nice thank you i will really enjoy it!!
a short but good/great piece a slice of cake from your little poem
was just so sweet and heartrendering

[Parashar]

really nice , i like it

[kjsa]

It's great and moving. Last to lines in the first stanza are great.

[Drew]

The very last stanza stayed with me,Our hearts should be portrayed as delicate origami that should only be handled with care and i could envision the need and want for a person in your life who could just be there when you needed somebody