Physician of the mind

Physician of the mind

A Poem by Tobias Rasmussen
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Why do I feel sad when I have done nothing wrong?

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Physician in me,
where would you be,
if not to inflict this self-chosen pain for free,
I know I fucked up.
You could have told me to stop.
But instead I was forced to keep my mouth shut.

Physician of the mind,
Could we turn back time?
It would make my life easy and closer to fine.
I hardly ever trust me self no more.
I would never have known, and therefore
this self-chosen pain is much too hardcore.

Physician of myself.
Please, put the book on the shelve,
I know, I won't do it again please dont drag me to hell.
I will trust in your special remedy.
You have filled my inner, made my stomach wring so foolishly
I will bear the wisdom in silence and tranquility.

© 2014 Tobias Rasmussen


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Pain is what we go through
bad choices, nasty side effects it brought

wanting to view the tranquil silence
in the moments of my innocence
wishing to be free in this well made irony

choices and its side effects
good or bad depends on us...

- faceless being...

Posted 10 Years Ago


We all go through the pain of dealing with foolish mistakes we make and it hurts a lot. This is shown through your writing very well. Keep it up.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Tobias Rasmussen

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much. You brought a smile to my face.

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Added on January 22, 2014
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Tobias Rasmussen
Tobias Rasmussen

Copenhagen, Denmark, Denmark



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I am new. I am young. My writing highly reflects my age and my POV in life. I have no experience writing happy and philosophical stuff. I can write dark and sad stuff since I can do what other young p.. more..

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