Flawless

Another about Him.

Eyes

As dark as chocolate

Deep and full of emotion

Rich and pure

 

Skin

So fair and soft

Electrifying to the touch

My fingers linger a second too long

 

Hands

So feminine and gentle

How can they belong to a boy

No flaws that my eye can see

 

Lips

Are mesmerizing

So pink and inviting

I can only imagine what they feel like

For now, I do not know

 

Author's Note

Yet another about him.

Reviews

[OceanTropic]

I loved the descriptions. The first stanza was great, because what you used to describe his eyes (like chocolate) could also be used to describe chocolate (rich and pure). I admit I was a bit distracted and craved some chocolate while reading that.

[Junger]

yea i see that and i still like the way it spounds with such delight

[Shy Girl]

I'm going to have to read the other one about him. I liked you descriptions so well worded and one after the other. Just normal features we see, but you made them juicey from your point of view. Very nice poem and I am going to have to read the other one or ones about him. :)

[Yellow Butterfly]

A beautiful poem coming straight from your hearts desires, simple description of words and a lovely imagery of how you see him.

Romantically sweet :o)

[Stars.Dreams]

wow, this is absolutely brilliant! ♥

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

It sounds like a daydream for your crush. It's so lovely. Great work!

[Sarah McConnaughey]

There's no such thing as flawless. This is a great poem, very pretty and well written.

[Moebia]

I love your descriptions. ;] This is one of my favorites.

[Onatah]

Very intimate and well written.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

what a gorgeous description! i can tell you love him a lot! it reminds me of the first guy i fell in love with. it makes me miss him...