Be Mine

For long I’ve told myself we were just friends

but it’s obvious to me now

that we are meant to be more

am not afraid any longer

to let my love flow

 You are the light that I need in darkness

Like fresh air to the lungs,

the thought of you keeps me going

even in the most difficult adversity

 Will you please be mine?

to cherish and to love

to hold and to kiss

till the end of time

These words I write in all sincerity

these heart I give to you till eternity

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Awe this was really cute. I hope this girl knows this. I really thought this was sweet as well. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Cynthia]

It's soooooooo sweet! I don't know how to describe my feeling!
I wish you will get a 'yes' for the answer.
Sweet Poem!

[china]

This is so sweet, words spoken from the heart. How could she not say yes to you. These words melt my heart. I'm wishing you the very best Tomi.

[Solitaire-P0ette]

awww this is soooo sweet!!! Wish someone would poetry like this to me =). she should love it!

[stars are far]

its really nice
and i hope you do it well :)

[AlieahRose]

IT REMINDS ME OF A POEM I WROTE ONCE...
VERY SIMILAR TO THIS ONE...
I LOVED THAT POEM FOR SO LONG...
AND I WAS WITH THE PERSON THAT I WROTE POEM FOR...
FOR THREE YEARS AFTER THAT...
SO THIS IS WELL DONE...
AND GOOD LUCK MY FRIEND...

[Nina Kari]

besides a few spellig errors this is wonderful. true words from the heart couldnt be expressed any better. good luck!!

[Ru Banerjee]

Very real, eloquent expression of true emotions that is intensely humane and spontaneous...liked the flow and cadence of the poem and the lyrical quality that keeps the lines in sync with your emotions...

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This is simple and clear, I like this wonderful feelings presented.

[YouoweYoupay]

Love blossoming from a friendship could tun out to be something wonderful, but from what it seems, it is still one-sided, which is painful in the present, troublesome/risky in the future. I would try to find out how she feels about me in an indirect way. It's better than blurting it out and getting hurt/rejected. I wish you luck. Thanks for sharing.

-Wella