Fresh brew

Fresh brew

A Poem by Precious Seconds

A morning of yesterdays


Some help of make believe


Start breathing

Shorter sways


Quiet range of note

Like you are the only one


Feeling this way


© 2016 Precious Seconds



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Serendipity,
"Fresh Brew" has a life of it's own. The brew is the inner combination of thought real to its bearer. "A morning of yesterdays, some help of make believe." first line, expresses the foundation of future life with the goal of what is desired. We have to imagine what we desire to begin to bring it to reality. Line 5 and 6; "Quiet range of note, like you are the only one feeling this way." Within the human psyche is the innate unique cell of life that makes each person who they are and we just feel the way we do whether others share our reality and focus or not. It would be nice to have your take on this poem as it intrigued me..............Blessings, Kathy

Posted 8 Months Ago


Precious Seconds

7 Months Ago

Thank you ... spot on .... you got my message
Kathy Van Kurin

7 Months Ago

Serendipity.
You are very welcome.
Kathy
Just stopped by to see what your vault holds and decided to start at the back, glad I did. I love the reflection of the piece, which you set out perfectly with your first line, which is exactly how I find myself feeling, as I sit in the kitchen with my coffee, looking out the window to the world that hasn't yet woken, full of reminiscence and what if's. Your final line says so much about us weird humans and our strange ways :)

Posted 9 Months Ago


Precious Seconds

8 Months Ago

Thanks Nemo
Looking out to that world with curiosity always
Longstanding love reaffirmed.
Maybe.
Thanks for sharing!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Precious Seconds

1 Year Ago

I am afraid so ...,,
Hi! : )
Richard here, come to share the wonderment of your wee poem; though, immensely more vast than your economy in words.
Ya know, Dear Poetess? You've brought to mind how all-encompassing memory can, indeed, be, and when better than at the beginning of day, over a steamy, freshly-brewed mug of life, imagining how one might have it than it actually was (but, that, too), as like cream and sugar, it flavors and sweetens to perfect taste.
Your deft metaphor and skillful imagery truly lights the moment … ha, we know all too well we're not the only ones, don't we … else-wise, whom could grasp or appreciate the essence of your brilliantly rendered word, eh? (LOL … I can [almost] hear you giggling at my interpretations)
Well, I could go on, but who wants to hear a bard's exuberant rantings!
I love it; your deep, original, poetic voice, M'Lady … what else! ⁓ Richard

Posted 1 Year Ago


Precious Seconds

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much Richard
Richard

1 Year Ago

Sure thing!
hooked and engaged title to finish ..
"Start breathing
Shorter sways" ...holds my attention ... morning coffee is an elixir of pleasant wanderings ... even those that are a bit sad ... i think every line in this poem is important ..equal .. such a smart twist in closing .. a little slap in the face keeping me from too much melancholy and self pity ... nice one!
E.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Precious Seconds

1 Year Ago

Thank you E
Nice use of words and description. You had me at the first line.
"A morning of yesterdays"
The statements were short and left something for the reader to grasp. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote





Posted 1 Year Ago


Precious Seconds

1 Year Ago

Thank you :)
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome.
Some morning do feel this way as well as some evenings. Quite thought provoking.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Precious Seconds

1 Year Ago

Thank you :)

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