Gentle sea

A circle of lips

Entwined on a word

Turning the fluttering sky

A darling heart

Blew life into a soul

A bloodstream of company

Curves of bright red

A time of pureness

Pages were not faded

The opposite of lonely

Color to the eye

Freed the mind

The being of none chemical

Kicking in 

True tunes ravishing 

the empty room of her

Another world

He has in part of 

Reviews

[Stefano Segnan]

Hello to you! I am not very fond of free verse poetry but this one really caught my attention. Somehow I grasp what it's trying to say but I cannot explain it, yet. There is some musicality in the verses although limited. The only advice I can give you is: you could experiment with this rhythm/musicality and try to expand it in future poems, but not if it limits your creativity or spontaneity in writing. It could add more resonance in the mind of the reader just as this poem did to mine.

[Nisreen]

i was writing about a soul mate
Thank you Stefano