Blue Bewilderment

The tangled life strolling this night

Smashing the glass veil on a heart

Sensing another cover 

Beyond the hill

The sun single formed

A memory of lakes filled with frozen ice

Fantasy engaged in purple dream

The mood was set to turn 

Scenes of autumn burnt the record

Hosting a play only in the mind

Touching the hollow image

Asking the winds to plead

The testament of your reality

Out of white cut out memory

Fast was the potion running through seeds

A spur of miraculous growth

Thinking of malice

Saying this must be hope

For once 

This is a defined form of light

The fingers you placed from a distance

Holding something i left untold

Healing beyond our thoughts

A stare from skin to bone

Perpetual 

Under the surface

Pronouncing shades of light 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful and amazing use of description. You took me with you and create visions of life, nature and light. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Nisreen]

Thank you C

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Emily]

Lovely write!!
Keep it up!

[Nisreen]

Thank you Emily

[Robert Haigh]

Some highly poetic imagery in this poem. Imaginative and lyrical. Well penned!

[Nisreen]

Thank you Robert

[Paul Bell]

Superb write. You do need to read your poems a few times to get into them, which is not a bad thing. Makes the reader think.

[Nisreen]

It is rewarding to learn anyone would read them once
now to know for fact that anyone could read them twice or more

oh my .... i cant stop smiling here

[Paul Bell]

I always like to see if poets are hiding hidden meanings.

[Nisreen]

i always do

[Nina H.]

This is beautiful! Very well written. "The fingers you placed from a distance holding something I left untold." That's deep. You are truly an amazing poet.

[Nisreen]

Thank you so much Nina

[Lorry]

Now that's poetry. So many great lines, flowing and cascading into each other like sheets fluttering in dark and in light, waiting for the frenzy to pass until they flutter back to earth with a beautifully soft ending. Great write.

[Nisreen]

Thank you so much for your words of encouragement

[Einstein Noodle]

what an enjoyable ride ..turned a little dark but your closing sealed a fine deal ;) this reminded me instantly of Jimi Hendrix :
"Fantasy engaged in purple dream" ..and his "Purple Haze" :))
love your stuff Ms. ..you know i do ..and this is no exception
E.

[Nisreen]

Thank you so much E
Hendrix Legendary :)

[Einstein Noodle]

:) ..................

[Quasi-Motorolla]

I love the fragments. Beautiful work. Very Lynchian.

[Nisreen]

Thank you :)

[Akshita]

It is a beautiful poem, although I am not able to understand it properly. Maybe it is because I am not old enough to! : )

[Nisreen]

It's not an age thing .... most people don't get my work because it is fragmented ..... thanks for the review

[Gray]

I'm not sure of the meaning but as a poem it is nice to read and contemplate each line. I imagine this is a dream that was formed from the impact another had on your life.

A fine poem for symbolism? and contemplation.

[Nisreen]

Right on the Money .....

[Gray]

Ahh...good on me.