In writing

I would write you
Letters upon a stream

Confessing emotion trapped
Within my deepest veins

I would tell you
Night fell into shyness in your presence

The dew resolute
On every page

Morning came breaking my silence
Blinking away your name

Your heart came knocking
Always to be answered

I wandered our silence

Reviews

[SleeplessVolcano]

Those letters......can stir us so much......I just discovered a box full of my own.....mostly diary entries (letters to myself).....got some soul-searching to do....:)

[Nisreen]

Done With mine
I know exactly what i want
Thanks :)

[SleeplessVolcano]

Never thought one could be done with soul-searching.......you should give me some tips then....

[Nisreen]

Not sure how .... But Its Been three years Now and today It dawned on me. I got everything i ever desired.... I guess gratitude is The end of soul searching.

[Quasi-Motorolla]

Fantastic poem. I love the lines "The dew resolute On every page" A great image.

[Nisreen]

Thank you i appreciate your support

[Diamond]

Beautiful pain filled poem, however we should also note that even the happy moments written together also are on the slate of a stream which eventually are lost in passage of Time. I hope that my review gives you some peace. Love, my friend.

[Nisreen]

I Write all sorts of things
I am at peace always :)

[Diamond]

lol, you are again drawing my attention. I am glad.

[Nisreen]

Glad i could do something good
always a pleasure

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like the sequence and how it goes from "i writing to you" to "we writing together"---

the transition of individuals into a "we."

j.

[Nisreen]

Waw That is quite a very deep review J
Thank you

[wordman]

touching write,in writing!

[Nisreen]

Thank you ............