Whispers of a Sahara

Sands seperated by the whistling sun

Poverty of singular grains shiver in heat

Whispers of life long lost through day

Thoughts settle through dusk like debris 

Seeping to another silver line in hollow space

Sands of the soul talk of a lover undeemed

Calling out the names in gentle converse 

Youth would reside with little blame

Rainbows of a dream would deflect this light

As your arrival would befall this soul

To greet the rebirth of whispers through sand

Hiding within your shade of all islands

Gazing upon the brightest moon on tracks

Midnight stars would guide us to mercy

Leaning onto the idea of being broken

Less is the heart standing before you in forgiveness

Breach not the veils of our sight in darkness

Rain on us the waters of mercy

Simple whispers of a Sahara 

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i love the paradoxes..."rainbows deflecting light"
"shiver in the heat".....this was a wonderful piece to come back to this morning...
you really made my day with these readings this morning...
j.

[Nisreen]

Thank you so much Jacob

[Onlyme]

A dreamy, whimsical, enchanting, poem of sands of time. And hope and wishes. The optimism of a wonderful level.

[Nisreen]

Thank you so much

[jacob erin-cilberto]

life is a desert...and that water of mercy is what keeps us forgiving one another...

the world needs more rain...we are getting so thirsty for love and peace...
i like the last line...wanting all of this is as simple as a whisper...
really good description here.

[Nisreen]

Thank you so much Jacob

[Paul Bell]

There must be wonderment in an ocean of sand.
Harshness but life seeking. A journey of optimism. But not for the fainthearted.

[Nisreen]

Thank you Paul

[Teddybearlee]

Seems there is hope and optimism in there, yet fairly dark and lost at the same time. Really enjoyed your writing. Thank you.

[Nisreen]

Thank you for your support