Visage

Angels may remain by her lips

Waiting for the right time

Flowing whisper wash away

Another destined bloom

Moonlight wave all of a word

Made of us printings read

Come close to a wave

As it softly laces you

Beauty aspiring a sublime fire

Lifeless line petal falls

Soft yet true

The gleaming lights evade

Cages running through air

Devoid of reflection

Translucent waters tamed

Wishing light held your hands

Reviews

[willweb]

Thoughts that seep deeply into our minds as the moon bids an illumined farewell as we watch the horizon awaiting a new day. Do we speak to the coming day, or do we whisper to the waves who as well are moving away though not to disappear completely. Beautifully written.

[Nisreen]

Thanks will

[Ciara]

The generous descriptions created vivid imagery in this soft and tender poem.

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'Visage'
'Precious Seconds,
Sad, sweet and cumulative all at once are above words.
I see mention of waves, of the moon but the mention of angels in first line caught
my attention.
'Angels may remain by her lips
Waiting for the right time'
It feels like they are waiting, watching and caring about the subject of this poem.
'Flowing whisper wash away
Another destined bloom'
A beautiful poem with a transcendent feeling to it of seeing a season, a person end
but the memory remaining. It felt like that to me anyway.
Thanks for a poem to ponder...something I like to do.
Kathy

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is just a lovely poem..there is a "sublime fire" of sharp imagery...
i just let this one touch me like i was sitting by the ocean supping the waves.
j.

[Nisreen]

Sweet
thank you Jacob

[Chris]

I liked the imagery this put behind my eyes.

[Nisreen]

Thank you Chris

[Paul Bell]

Like this.
Feels like the final moments of life.
Hopefully peaceful.

[Nisreen]

Or the beginning thank you

[Onlyme]

Such a romantic poem about love. Beautifully expressed and felt.

[Nisreen]

Thanks dawn. Sweet review