Organizing My Work

Organizing My Work

A Story by TopHatGirl
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A bunch of sentences and stanzas that I am going to put into poems or stories. Im keeping them here for now so I don't forget them.

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   The sunset looked like someone had just cried blood.



    Rocking back and forth,
 the dread comes.
   Ticking away my death.


  When I was little, my brother told me that one person can't save the world. How right he was.


    Umbrellas flew into the air, with no hope of returning.

    Sorrow flies,
    happiness drags,
   what a twisted world we're in.

    
      My number was 7, and there was 6 people ahead of me waiting to die.

   Night fell, and so did my grandmother.


The end is only the beginning, because there is still more to discover in the ending.

 



    

>>use these pics in writing.

So naturally everything went wrong.


     

© 2010 TopHatGirl


Author's Note

TopHatGirl
Please if you wish, help me revise and edit these sentences, stanzas, etc, so they're ready for actual writing. This is going to be added onto alot, since i have many ideas and zero time.

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