Addiction

Addiction

A Poem by TopHatGirl
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I try.
I fail.
It's tempting.
Pressure, pressure.
I succumb.
One time.
I'm hooked.
Sweet rush.
Tingling feeling.
Can't stop.
More, more.
Inhale, exhale.


Once more.
Insides burst.
Inner strength.
Can't stop.
Power building.
Head clears.
Pound, pound.
Regret, regret.
But again.
The rush.
Can't stop.

Please, no.
Too powerful.
Can't resist.
More, more.
It's addiction.

They discover.
They accuse.
They cry.
I cry.
Not perfect.
Please, stop.
They beg.
I nod.
Throw away.
Struggle, struggle.
Rise above.
Stopping madness.
I try.
I succeed.



© 2010 TopHatGirl


Author's Note

TopHatGirl
In english, learning different poem types. Tried doing two word poems. Its hard, but addicting.

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I do like the two words format.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like it too! It reminds me of a story I wrote called Deadly Addiction... good partners (hehe).
The poem is really well written, I like the two word thing too.
:)
Great work!

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like it! It reminds of so many things I've come across in the past.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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