Him, My Love

He is My Love

As I walk I see

Him coming closer and closer

He is my future

Never to be my past

Always to be my present

To be his and happy

Is all I ask

 

And yet the time for us to be

Seems to get no closer

Time stands still and

I am tired of the waiting

I want

I need

To

Be

There, with him

Holding Him

Helping Him

Loving Him

 

Reviews

[frogbean]

good choice of words to describe your thoughts. it is a very emotional peice that describes several emotions in one peoce but it works well like this

FrOgBeAn

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Ah, so sweet and tender .. i love it .. a true love poem ...longing to be with that person that makes one feel complete and not able to be .. very sad poem of love and longing .

Chloe
xoxo

Love the title ..

[Sally Edwards]

Beautiful short poem, it conveys your need, love and frustration perfectly, I enjoyed reading this.

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This is good! You seem to but a lot of emotion into the words you chose. The poem is very beautiful and moving.