My Thoughts Concerning Him

My Thoughts Concerning Him

A Poem by Riley Justine
"

Trust doesn't exist in my world

"
A little part of me knows
that it will all end the same.
With scars and tears
and all the effort will be in vain.
I know your devotion will fade,
that there is no hope,
only rain clouds ahead
and with the storm I will have to cope.
And with this knowledge 
I suppose I'm just curious...
wondering how you'll break
my heart.

© 2016 Riley Justine


Author's Note

Riley Justine
I don't expect much.

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Realistic words and thoughts my friend. It is sad we walk into love fearing sadness when we should be seeking happiness. Thank you Riley for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love this poem! great job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Riley Justine

7 Years Ago

Thank you!
It depends on the right moment, finding true love ain't a game, but when you do, you feel like you have conquered the world. Realistic composition. ☺

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Riley Justine

7 Years Ago

Thanks for the review!
Dr. YumnaKay

7 Years Ago

You are welcome ☺

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Added on October 26, 2016
Last Updated on November 13, 2016
Tags: love, broken, trust, knowledge, curious

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Riley Justine
Riley Justine

Alberta, Canada



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