Surpassing Amends

Surpassing Amends

A Poem by Riley Justine
"

Only one of us deserves it

"
THEY SAY PIECES
OF A BROKEN HEART
will fit
TOGETHER

BUT I GUESS OURS
ARE BEYOND REPAIR
because
we don't fit
together
anymore.

© 2016 Riley Justine


Author's Note

Riley Justine
These broken hearts can't heal.

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When heart is done with someone. Can't be repaired. I liked the logical ending to the poem. Thank you Riley for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is indeed the tragedy. hearts when broken can never fit. Although one may strive and appear to do so. Great read! Keep up the good work :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Riley Justine

7 Years Ago

Thanks for reviewing!
Dr. YumnaKay

7 Years Ago

You are welcome! The pleasure was mine ☺

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Added on October 26, 2016
Last Updated on November 13, 2016
Tags: broken, love, hearts

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Riley Justine
Riley Justine

Alberta, Canada



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