Everything from Nothing

Everything from Nothing

A Poem by transentience

I
am
The

space
within a
blink and an
indescribable feeling
where no word can place the tears

form
softly
the caress
impressing with
my lips to your cheek link
our one's in two, across the sea, from me to

You
are
The

air that fuels my blood
you hold my breath
to bite my tongue
before I speak
what can not say
your stormy eyes, in silence, breaks

strings that pluck upon your harp
vibrate in waves of blue and gray
sync your chords into my heart
arpeggiate our melody
on off-beat notes
to find the ones that harmonize
keys of bone--our temple shrine
engraving songs so purely sweet
in moonstar dreams and symphonies

from our nothingness it seems
everything unites
breathe to realize we've been free
since we first transcended time

© 2016 transentience


Author's Note

transentience
You are an instrument of celestial sound and light. You are bound only by the colors you emit and the music that moves you...

I tried to incorporate the golden ratio into the beginning of this piece; each letter character and the latter spaces between them follows the sequence pattern in the ratio (1,2,3,5,8,13, etc). The following stanza accounts for the numbers in-between the ratio (4,6,7,9,10, etc). The rest of the poem details the symmetries found in romances dance.

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oh what a horrible ending sir!! :) i was so captured by all those lines of not being able to say the words to express those deep, mysterious, serene, positive and spiritual places ... and you put it to death!! arrrrrrrrrrrrrrgh! ;)) we walk away from it too easily and too often don't we!? your poem works on me ..:)
E.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

7 Years Ago

oh! i don't know! its a fine twist and we absolutely put those intimate and gifted relationships do .. read more
transentience

7 Years Ago

well i changed it anyway! :) It makes more sense (i think) now~
Einstein Noodle

7 Years Ago

:) .......... of course you did :)))))))) love to you my friend!



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The second to last verse was fantastic, as was the last verse as well. I had a bit of trouble following the sparser lines but it just took me a few seconds to get used to it.

Whomever said the ending was horrible is sadly mistaken, I thought it was bold and darkly decisive. I like romance tinged with darkness.

Two Thumbs Up!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Some very nice phrasing. Enjoyed.
I couldn't help notice the comment below so I'm curious about how it ended before.



Posted 7 Years Ago


Amazing ending... I loved the way your poem moves with different thoughts... The word choices were excellent along with the presentation... A lovely write... It took me to different world of thoughts.... Very well done dear frnd....

Sincerely,
Dhiman

Posted 7 Years Ago


oh what a horrible ending sir!! :) i was so captured by all those lines of not being able to say the words to express those deep, mysterious, serene, positive and spiritual places ... and you put it to death!! arrrrrrrrrrrrrrgh! ;)) we walk away from it too easily and too often don't we!? your poem works on me ..:)
E.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

7 Years Ago

oh! i don't know! its a fine twist and we absolutely put those intimate and gifted relationships do .. read more
transentience

7 Years Ago

well i changed it anyway! :) It makes more sense (i think) now~
Einstein Noodle

7 Years Ago

:) .......... of course you did :)))))))) love to you my friend!

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Added on April 14, 2016
Last Updated on November 29, 2016
Tags: love, science, spirit, god, souls, music, theory, hearts, strings, time, space, something from nothing, stars, songs, moon, sun, universe

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transentience
transentience

Buena Park, CA



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29. Writer, dreamer, musician, thinker, disabstractionist An empath who fights for what they believe in My mind is a blessing and a curse, but music keeps me balanced I tend to psychoanalyze .. more..

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