"Inheritance"

"Inheritance"

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Breathe...
the dream that sleeps
within
uni-verse, the song
behold
holographic will

© 2015 ...



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I am amazed , you say so much in so few words. Incredible.

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1 Year Ago

If you're amazed, I'm smiling :)
You slay me with your mastery of brevity.
A quite interesting title; all that is, is of the Origin ( my take on thus gem)

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1 Year Ago

That is an amazing compliment coming from you, sir :) Thank you Wondering!
You truly do know how to weave enchantments. One can feel the movement of the breath, the awakening dream, the universe flowing in music and revealing the deeper places. Divine.

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1 Year Ago

Thank you so much, Craig...
What beautiful a journey it is to roam in the dreamy world of universe by your carefully chosen words dear frnd... A very thought provoking write...

Sincerely
Dhiman

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1 Year Ago

Thank you so much, Dhiman :)
Very nice. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.Eva

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1 Year Ago

Thank you Eva :)
EvaThornburn

1 Year Ago

Your welcome
twelve! twelve words (if you count uni-verse as one word. clever by the way) is all it took to start tongues wagging and poets fighting over which interpretation is the correct one. much like abstract painting. and that my friend is what makes your poetry so special.


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1 Year Ago

You're so sweet woody :) Thank you for leaving your footprints on my page!
What a way to start the day with reading this little gem like in our minds we have our own cosmos, somewhat inherited, passed down from which we grow. Nice brevity which makes you ponder on this write even more

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1 Year Ago

Hey look who decided to brighten my screen :) Thank you Andrew!
andrew mitchell

1 Year Ago

you are welcome lynn ,your work is just a pleasure, even intimidating its that good! lol
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1 Year Ago

awww thank you so much Andrew :)
You have a unique way with words. Holographic will is just brilliant.

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1 Year Ago

Thank you so much, dear poet :)
WittyWonka

1 Year Ago

You're welcome. Thank you for the poet compliment. :)
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dan
lynn, I always love pieces that make me think, ideas scattering then merging in my mind to go after the deep meaning. Dreams so often are the basis of so many writes, and the reason is that it opens so many doors of possibility (insert idea HERE) that I know when I read this again (and I WILL) it will yield a different feeling, a different scope of thought. SO well done, lynn; this is being saved into my library favorites, so thank you for that! take care...dan

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1 Year Ago

Hello Dan :) Good to see your footprints on my page. I am truly glad you liked this one. Thank you, .. read more
dan

1 Year Ago

Leave humility to lackluster writes, be PROUD of this one, young lady!!! peace...dan
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1 Year Ago

hahaha Thank you, Dan :)
Breathe the dream, live the inner world, search in sleep, sing the visions of it all.
I have to wonder what you are like, to sit and talk with. Your thoughts are so deep and intense. I would venture a guess, and I mean this with absolute respect and admiration, that some people are terrified of you ... because of the clarity with which you see.

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1 Year Ago

Softly, I am honored by your response. Thank you so much, dear poet :)

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