clotted

clotted

A Poem by ...

My heart is
the poet
My mind is
the analytical

coagulated

   p

     a

      t

         h

       w

     a

         y








© 2015 ...



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ahahahha! the mind does get in the way of things at times ..no doubt about it ... at worst slows, even stops the poetic processes ... at best can search and find organization, more colorful phrasing etc. i like this poem a lot ..who can not relate to it :)
E.
ps i think your formatting is particularly successful ...

Posted 3 Years Ago


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3 Years Ago

Hi E :) Love it when you come to visit. Wish I couldn't relate to it lol ((( you)))
Einstein Noodle

3 Years Ago

:) ....back at ya!
Interesting thought process about thought. I like its pathways.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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3 Years Ago

Hi ken :) good seeing you, my friend
Love the formatting of this poem and the message, so clear and evident in such a neat little package. We just need to make sure the heart has a "save" function. Great writing.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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3 Years Ago

Thank you :)
My mind is always jamming up, preventing the emotion from flowing fluently. My pathway is not as smooth as yours. It would have to have more jigs and jags.
I like this brief write. The visual at the end is an added little bonus.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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3 Years Ago

Jaycee! So good to see you by again. Thank you my dear poet :)
Can we be poets without the mind? Never. Yet it can clot up and cause the heart to stop beating.
I really like this very much!

Posted 3 Years Ago


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3 Years Ago

Thanks again, David. Seems I'm a..clotted again for now
 David Scott

3 Years Ago

We shall find rat poison then... ;) Funny how a poison can save lives though.
Cheers to insp.. read more
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3 Years Ago

:).........................
and your soul is the spirit that sings!!!!!thank you for singing to us!! :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


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3 Years Ago

Awww...thank you, Terry, for such a beautiful review :)
terry smith

3 Years Ago

My pleasure my friend!! :)
Such a concise and beautiful write...the path is often more than not paved with obstructions...beautiful!

Posted 3 Years Ago


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3 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Poppy. So nice to see you grace my page again :)
Nice way to define the Poet. Not easy to describe a writer's mind and journey. Thank you Lynn for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


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3 Years Ago

John, sweet of you to spend so much time on my page...thank you
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

I enjoyed the time and you are welcome.
Lovely.
Seemed, the life's always full of analogies that work 'pon visions/thoughts drifted alongside. I find kinda simplicity in your words.. which's very eye-catching. Short.simple. & relevant. Wonderful.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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3 Years Ago

Adams, thank you so much. That's me, sir, simple :)
Adams

3 Years Ago

You're welcome ;)
Yes, I do figure it all out through your stuffs. Simplicity reflects throug.. read more
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Ohhh Lynn, now you got me thinking what's worse: a traffic jam of the synapses or a blood clot?!? A mind and heart fueling the pen in different medians I must say. :D

Posted 3 Years Ago


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3 Years Ago

laughing...I don't know how I missed your review here but I did :( Damn pissed too cuz I could have .. read more

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