A Musing of Me

A Musing of Me

A Poem by ...

You left poems in me.

The air is pregnant with you;

I feel your lungs expanding

in the ground

as the Maple breathes,

and the salt decides to linger

around me.

And its just like you

to break the silence,

and call me over to see the sky

giving birth

to the other side of your gaze.

You would have written to me

about the paths between the clouds,

the mango glade on which you rest

the sea of purple at your feet.



© 2016 ...



My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

you left poems in me and i love it thanks for sharing.

Posted 1 Month Ago


This is beautiful Lynn, from first line to last and everything in between. So much anguish softly spoken, like a sigh that tried to be held in, but escaped, bringing images flooding into the readers mind of the places you speak of. Superb.

Posted 11 Months Ago


...

11 Months Ago

Thank you so much Nemo, for such a beautiful review
This is exquisite, lynn. Your Muse must be extremely amused!!

Posted 12 Months Ago


...

12 Months Ago

:) Thank you Wondering!
Two words: ABSOLUTE PERFECTION

Posted 1 Year Ago


...

1 Year Ago

Emma, thank you so much. Coming from such talent as yourself...I am honored :)
phew!!!! gee what a beaut! impeccable. that's it, found the right adjective. and I love it.

Posted 1 Year Ago


...

1 Year Ago

:)) Thank you, woody. I will be by to visit in a bit. Good seeing you in my hood
What a smooth and soft, great choice of words. Really nicely crafted. A joy to read.

Posted 1 Year Ago


...

1 Year Ago

Thank you Vanessa, I am pleased you liked it
Closed

1 Year Ago

I did. You're welcome.
Such a beautiful poem, it's very passionate with the miracle of birth and life. Your descriptions stand out from others
'the mango glade on which you rest
the sea of purple at your feet' being my favourite line of the poem.
Lovely work!
Georgie.

Posted 1 Year Ago


...

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for stopping by :)
Deeply melancholy and intensely loving.
Someone very special has left you, but, obviously, not without the blessed fortification of lovely, soul-sustaining memories.
A gorgeous piece, Lynn!


Posted 1 Year Ago


...

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much, Frank :) Always good seeing you by
A very modern & sadistical version of organ & "orgasm" i come to read through this "diana" write. Very captivating. sensual. passitionately "penetrating" & so "ejaculating" form of art you have transmulated in words. Excellent! Must adore you for the talent you are "causuallly" born & so fair & fine "transfigured" with.

(Giving you 100/100... not for getting a plethora of poetry in you but how artististixall you just dance 'pon ur lovers hearts'. Marvelous!!)

Ps. I find the "old" lynn here in this poetry, so eligant, graceful, kinda typa jeopardy that has this whole widen world under the very raw threat of her Wild Wilde & Wagnour Behaviour. Damn son!! Hi Lynn, mind me leaving some poetry in you? *kidding*

Posted 1 Year Ago


...

1 Year Ago

Your reviews always give me a chuckle :)) Thank you so much Adams
what a beautiful poem, and the title fits perfectly

Posted 1 Year Ago


...

1 Year Ago

What a beautiful person, and your comment means everything

First Page first
Previous Page prev
1
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe

Advertise Here
Advertise Here
Want to advertise here? Get started for as little as $5

Stats

838 Views
22 Reviews
Rating
Shelved in 1 Library
Added on April 3, 2016
Last Updated on April 3, 2016

Author

...
...

MI



Writing
"Timeless" "Timeless"

A Poem by ...


"Pandemic" "Pandemic"

A Poem by ...


"High (lol) " "High (lol) "

A Poem by ...



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Leaves Leaves

A Poem by ...


"Timeless" "Timeless"

A Poem by ...