Souls travel while you sleep

lying in my slumber,

I feel a sort of awakening.

I can sense my soul flying towards the sky,

Up, up and away,

so far that its unimaginable to think of where it might be going.

It floats slightly in the wind 

and through the clouds darkened all around by the night sky.

Then suddenly it begins to drift down landing in a very unknown,

but almost familiar place.

The morning arrives and i feel the contentment 

of an adventure full night.

 

Author's Note

Any critiques??
Thanks!
-Annie

Reviews

[Inject Positivity]

the title caught my eye.... i do believe that our souls travel, they go to different places without facing any boundaries...i love how you gave a mesmerizing sense in it.... beautifully done.... 100 ratings....

[paul]

beautiful! inventive. dreamy. mystical.
very well written

[Annie Nicole]

Thank you! : )