Karaoke

Karaoke

A Poem by David Elijah
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looks like i'm praying
head down towards the pavement
but really i'm afraid to face
the messes i've made

the voices i hear speak blessing
pouring on me like rain
i grasp it to throw it away
disappearing like water down a drain

me and my friends
go to Your house every sunday
i think they're singing Your praise
but to me it's just karaoke

Spirit break out
break my stone heart down
i feel more lost than found
God this is where i'm at right now.

© 2018 David Elijah


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I like the thoughts and emotions in this poem.... The words are descriptive enough so I could understand your meaning...

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

David Elijah

5 Years Ago

Thanks dude! Wow i just started posting today and i already have a response :))))
April Blue

5 Years Ago

:) :) :) Sure, you are very welcome...

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Added on April 30, 2018
Last Updated on April 30, 2018
Tags: sad, free writing, emotional, idk what tags to do tbh, im currently listening to kanye, God, church, jesus, this is a prayer, prayer

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David Elijah
David Elijah

Tacoma, WA



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I tend to write when I'm sad. I'm basically dumping all my poetry and lyrics here lol. Baptist, 19, Korean-American, meme addict, love listening to and making music, all time favorite record is Spr.. more..

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A Poem by David Elijah