the hardest part about loving you

the hardest part about loving you

A Poem by TL

the hardest part about loving you

is walking you out at the end of the night

when you kiss me goodbye

everything in the world ceases to exist

the silence of the night

engulfs us in a sphere of intimacy

a closeness that brings a connection

i have never felt while saying goodbye

a feeling as if our souls are becoming people

reaching for one another for one last touch

© 2017 TL


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True love cuts a path within our soul it seems. And the same love that cut paths, if it shall leave, those paths then turn into scars. You did well with your description indeed. Great work!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TL

5 Years Ago

thank you!
Levi Levin

5 Years Ago

You are welcome!

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Added on December 3, 2017
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TL
TL

Philadelphia, PA



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