Visit me more often

Visit me more often

A Poem by thetish
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Waking in tears, it all felt too real, to have seen my loved one who has passed.

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The sight of you walking in
Your face lit up with cheer
Wrapping your arms around me
Giving me hope that you were near.

Holding on to me so tightly and
Not letting go until you could feel
That I had regained my composure
and was able to stand on my feet.

I'm so thankful for the image
If only in my dreams you came
To support and love and guide me
Through this upside-down maze of life

Your being forever remains in me
Your memory as strong as ever
If missing you were an event
I would be the main contestant.

Thank you my dear for the visit
Please let it not be the last
Come stay in my dreams more often
And tell me of all that has passed.

© 2017 thetish



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Your words are deeply moving, and even in the darkness of dreams there is a hope that seems to rise there. I could relate too well to this longing for those who only visit in these places of dreams now. Painfully beautiful.

Posted 5 Months Ago


thetish

5 Months Ago

Thank you for reading and commenting. 🙏🏻
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Zoe
Aww, this is so pleasant to read! You made the reader feel it. Very well written!

Posted 8 Months Ago


thetish

8 Months Ago

Many thanks, Zoe.
Zoe

8 Months Ago

you're welcome.
quite haunting given the context but beautiful. perhaps use more imaginative imagery for improvement :)

Posted 8 Months Ago


thetish

8 Months Ago

Thanks for reading, Ling. This was something I wrote down, with tears streaming down my cheeks, afte.. read more

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