Phoenix

Phoenix

A Poem by Ty
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Phoenix, Long Awaited, Love.

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Hurtled voices, distant in wind
Echo
Love
Scream
Amber ridden infinite descendant
Magnificent Phoenix of the Arabian desert
Heavy as nightmares
Limited
Realizing you're unable to manipulate nature,
She unfolds at her will
Subtle sentiment
Indigenous
Sometimes sunsets masquerade as still images of Reine Sea refracting town lights and Hell Peak
Or Deep Bay, Canada.
Comes flooding,
Though debris remains, it recedes in days
Temporary
When love's lost, it isn't immediate,
Delayed, it's late,
Scents,
Comets infiltrating Jupiter's atmosphere and breaks apart
The rainbow that could never stretch too far
I'd assume my mind will placidly drift to either place
Peace make and assured patience, 
Indeed it waits,
For love's return.





© 2017 Ty



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Your poem is an exquisite explosion of feelings, words, imagery, streaming non-stop and leaving me breathless. Primal, electric image of the Phoenix impacts the eyes."Magnificent Phoenix of the Arabian Desert...heavy as nightmares"-transcendent metaphor. What manner of love is this that so incites?-"She unfolds at her will..subtle sentiment..indigenous". Powerful, Master-Class work.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ty

4 Months Ago

I believe fear, optimism, exhaustion, patience, and desire find a path to collide and erupt. Can't t.. read more



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Great piece! Thank you for submitting for all about love contest!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ty

3 Months Ago

Of course, thanks. Glad you liked!
The strength of your words imprints stunning imagery, much enjoyed...

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ty

3 Months Ago

Ah, Mr. E, didn't see this. Absolutely appreciate your dropping by. Glad this caught your attention.
Your poem is an exquisite explosion of feelings, words, imagery, streaming non-stop and leaving me breathless. Primal, electric image of the Phoenix impacts the eyes."Magnificent Phoenix of the Arabian Desert...heavy as nightmares"-transcendent metaphor. What manner of love is this that so incites?-"She unfolds at her will..subtle sentiment..indigenous". Powerful, Master-Class work.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ty

4 Months Ago

I believe fear, optimism, exhaustion, patience, and desire find a path to collide and erupt. Can't t.. read more

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Tags: Love, romance, sea, nature, rainbow, fantasy, peace, magic, Norway, Canada, passion, poetry, poem, prose, haiku, america, protest, fight, Arabian, light, soul, patience, Phoenix, sunset, dreams, life

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