Bottled

When A Bottle Talks. Poured Emotion.

When a bottle talks

It isn't filtered

Screams

It shrieks every word

Vulgar condensation weeping

It's so much pain

Weaving

In between insanity and Purity

As if you could wash free all debt and depression

Obsession with clarity

Answers and understanding

Memories

Rebuilt my wall with broken rebar

So still I find I'm...

Structural dysfunction

Narrating

When a bottle talks

It pours

Erupts

Every thought

Abrupt

Every emotion

Stirs up,

What little hope remains

Disdain

The clash of a freight train and Supernova

Inevitable intersection drawn closer,

Of the bottle,

To the brim, to the tip

I'd attempt to make bare the puzzle piece that would fit

Damning

Stranded

Drowning.

Reviews

[Nariko]

For some reason, I kept having an image of a kettle boiling on the stovetop instead of a bottle

[Faith Knoll]

The way you wrote this plays a story in the readers' heads. Love it! Great job

[Ty]

Tapping into some personal emotions, glad you enjoyed. Definitely appreciate your dropping by!