Magnitude

Magnitude

A Poem by Ty
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Magnitude

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Magnitude
An extent of efforts and love
Invested vastness
Over Kalahari's vast desert
Veiled in blanketed, searing heat from above
Determined magnitude,
Time
My compass, clock, and stopwatch
I'd travel back through past and Magnolia trails
Thick and heavy
Congruous the latitude and longitude South of the equator
As if I'd evaluated humidity intensively in subtropical lands
I'll forever value your words,
Your peace, your treasure
So what is your view?
How does it measure?
A different perspective
Your energy
Stellar gravitational inter connectivity
A universe that wouldn't abide by the rules
Mind, body, and auras
The soul of Neptune
Or an Elephant in the room
In an effort to reach you in words, instances, and inches
In hopes of achieving emotional connect,
Of scale of long days basking in ambiance and sweeping Moravian Fields
An energy that'd imitate cliffs of Moher
Rigid, steep,
Eminence
Thoughts intricately woven as ancient calligraphy
In fact I've asked my environment
From Serengeti to Heavens,
Where rain fell in plenty
And concluded a metropolitan mind wouldn't know any better
Sometimes emanating ignorance
Imitating distance between a red and blue state
Distinctive
A transcontinental villain dark voyage,
Voices and sea so deep
It'd reverberate and quake
Funneled through tunnels and time
With no escape,
It flooded for miles
Headache of heartache
And still some would swan dive into valleys of pain
And deep ocean trenches
To save as many, they'd repeat this again
Confirmation there's a fraction of humanity left within.
Magnitude.





© 2017 Ty



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'A universe that wouldn't abide by the rules
Mind, body, and auras
The soul of Neptune
Or an Elephant in the room
In an effort to reach you in words, instances, and inches.. '

Not entirely sure if this is written with an irate or beautiful pen. Perhaps both- as your poem steams on and on across the world.. seeing and feeling so many emotions as if part sage, part herald. You write with amazing dignity.. thank you for saring and for being a true guide, Ty..

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ty

1 Month Ago

Your words absolutely resonate deeply.This is an attempt at a 360 degree perspective of everything. .. read more



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Herculean strength, colossal engagement, a masterpiece of mind & soul.

Regards,
Al

Posted 5 Days Ago


What an absolutely fantastic use of flow and imagery. I was hooked by the second line. I'm So glad I happened upon this poem!

Posted 5 Days Ago


'A universe that wouldn't abide by the rules
Mind, body, and auras
The soul of Neptune
Or an Elephant in the room
In an effort to reach you in words, instances, and inches.. '

Not entirely sure if this is written with an irate or beautiful pen. Perhaps both- as your poem steams on and on across the world.. seeing and feeling so many emotions as if part sage, part herald. You write with amazing dignity.. thank you for saring and for being a true guide, Ty..

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ty

1 Month Ago

Your words absolutely resonate deeply.This is an attempt at a 360 degree perspective of everything. .. read more
This is incredibly inspiring. I have so much admiration for your writing, it really has the ability to move people. Great piece!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ty

1 Month Ago

I've done my job then! Thank you so much.
This is a grand write. A story well worth sharing. There is so much emotion packed inside.. Well done.xo

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ty

1 Month Ago

Ah, can't thank you enough. Much appreciated, Tracey!
A Poem is nothing until and unless you breathe in emotions in the gaps between each and every word.
It's fantabulous! Keep writing!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ty

1 Month Ago

Even in your review your words are poetic! Can't thank you enough.
Jiya

1 Month Ago

Your writings are impeccable, I really want you to teach me the secret of your perfection. It's like.. read more
I don't want my review to be long, because all my worlds have the same meaning: very beautiful.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ty

1 Month Ago

Even one word would stretch for decades. Much appreciated Miss.
Jes' Pi

1 Month Ago

you're welcome
"Headache of heartache"

Yaassss!!!! Seldom are the two connected as a part of the same condition.

I, too, wonder if you have traveled to all these places you reference. If so, what fantastical places and people you must have met!

I believe you have, for you write with authority regarding these places and was able to connect them all not with geography, but with the human responses to disaster referenced in your final lines. This is quite a gem, Ty.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ty

1 Month Ago

Ah, your energy is radiating through the page! Much appreciated. As I told Annette, I can't claim al.. read more
What a magnificent panorama this poem is Ty! Have you really travelled so far, to all those exotic places? I envy you that. You must know the true magnitude of the natures of man and creatures and the earth itself. Yes, ignorant metropolitan minds abound. Love your eloquent, evocative, intricate and interwoven exotic imagery, the coordinates of your sacred places. Yes, Thank God for the few who suffer selflessly to save the many lost in all the magnitude of magma. Master Class vision and poem Ty. Kudos!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ty

1 Month Ago

Words that continue to resonate, uplift, and inspire! I can't claim I've been to every single place... read more
Annette Pisano Higley

1 Month Ago

You are se welcome friend Ty!

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