Rehearsal

Rehearsal

A Poem by Ty
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Rehearsal

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I know why the morning air dares to dance with Dandelions, 

Horizons, and Sunflowers.

The gravity of graceful stares, etched in clock hours.

Time and towering Sparrows,

Native arrows of talons through space;

As if Maya Angelou would personally tell the solar wind why the caged bird sings.

A line between ivory and a black leaf,

Gleaming particles from the sun come crashing into the magnetosphere.

Producing dancing auroras in the night sky.

A poetic rehearsal,

A performance to repeat.

In the morning.






© 2018 Ty



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...I cannot particularly put into words the sublimity and mystic aura that this poems conveys into the atmosphere! This awesome! In assonance, musicality, imagery! You got it down! It flows with a lulling lilt that really makes the readers feel, and that image to go along with it is simply perfect (and divine)! Well done!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ty

6 Months Ago

Your review is absolutely amazing, conveying emotions evoked in you. So many thanks!
emipoemi

6 Months Ago

my pleasure.



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The words meld into a melodic flow of perfection. I have the warm and fuzzies. Nicely done.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Ty the wizard is blending again. you may find words coming in eclectic places that are sure to please.....or by the way this is me.

regards,
al

Posted 5 Months Ago


LOVE! LOVE! LOVE! This is amazing! I love your originality & your opening line that harkens to Maya, then including her more specifically, later on. Some writers (like Maya) are so good, you just want to use a few of their words, even tho you very much make this poem your own! *smile* Your imagery floats on the breeze (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Months Ago


Wonderful use of words and thoughts. I had to read again. Always a pleasure to read your work Ty. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ty

5 Months Ago

As always. Many thanks Coyote!
Coyote Poetry

5 Months Ago

You are welcome Ty. I enjoyed this one.
Celestial beauty is stunning...a celebration of daybreak and night. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ty

5 Months Ago

Kind words Divya, can't thank you enough.
The beauty of new awakenings where all is at peace and dancing in the symphony of oneness and peaceful spendor of unity- beautiful words🌹

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ty

5 Months Ago

I'm thankful as I read your beautiful and poetic words my friend.
this is a lovely piece of work
I like the introduction of Maya Angelou
I like the repeat button and life of course goes on ;) very nice X

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ty

6 Months Ago

Something I'd hope would resonate with many. Thanks so much!
"Gleaming particles from the sun come crashing into the magnetosphere.

Producing dancing auroras in the night sky.''

These lines from this poem are beautiful! Thank you for sharring it with me :)!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ty

6 Months Ago

I'd hoped to instill words of a more lighthearted root. Glad those lines caught your attention! Many.. read more
I like your descriptions. Each line feels inspirational, like I could derive an entire scene from even a single one.

“Native arrows of talons through space” sounds especially unique to me.

I enjoyed being pulled into this intriguing picture!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ty

6 Months Ago

Too kind! Can't thank you enough. I'm always in hopes the photos will shed additional light in some .. read more
H L Rose

6 Months Ago

Of course! The photo definitly connects well with the poem and it’s great that the imagery in the .. read more
...I cannot particularly put into words the sublimity and mystic aura that this poems conveys into the atmosphere! This awesome! In assonance, musicality, imagery! You got it down! It flows with a lulling lilt that really makes the readers feel, and that image to go along with it is simply perfect (and divine)! Well done!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ty

6 Months Ago

Your review is absolutely amazing, conveying emotions evoked in you. So many thanks!
emipoemi

6 Months Ago

my pleasure.

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