Wolf

this is a semi-random poem about a specific wolf and his story

Bark, wolf, bark

Let the pack

Hear your voice

Howl, wolf, howl

Let the world

Hear your song

Growl, wolf, growl

Let your foe

Hear your strength

Bark, wolf, bark

Tell the pack

Your story

Howl, wolf, howl

Tell the world

Of your pain

Growl, wolf, growl

Tell your foes

You're still here

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

Simple, impactful, great repetition, and use of structure. Welcome to the wolf pack, there seem to be several of us wolf lovers skulking around in here :)

[The Violent Wolf]

thank you ^_^

[The Butterfly Writer]

I like the parallel structure of this poem. The repeated onomatopoeia, it's really good artwork. Good job.

[The Violent Wolf]

thank you ^_^ glad you liked it!

[White Snake]

This is full of life, but someone else's. Do you ever thing you personify your own thoughts and emotions through characteristics of different animals? Like Wolves, pandas, tigers, huskies, and other such creatures? ;)

Also, while reading, I understood the wolf barks, but i couldn't help but wonder... WHAT DOES THE FOX SAY? :D

[The Violent Wolf]

oh.my.word. lol maybe i'll use other kinds of animals in my poems haha ahm, i have heard that the fox says Fraka-kaka-kaka-kaka-kow! lol

[DogDrawler]

I like the diversity you showed. I loved! :)

[The Violent Wolf]

thank you! glad you liked it :D

[Aarea]

I love wolves! This poem was really good! It seemed sad, but the wolf kept fighting. I loved the repetition and how you worded everything.

[The Violent Wolf]

thank you! ^_^

[Alexa Tasch]

Like Amber said, I love the repetition! And the short lines! You don't waste any words and get the image out beautifully :)

[The Violent Wolf]

tnx :D so glad u guys liked it xD

[Alexa Tasch]

Welcome!

[Amber Tasch]

i love the simplicity and repetition of this piece. Its really refreshing to see a set up like this and i love it! I can really imagine the wolf. good job Hanah!

[The Violent Wolf]

aww tnx xDDD haha