Ruth III of III (Finale)

Ruth III of III (Finale)

A Poem by Orlando G Gonzales III
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From the collection "Saldado Instrúyete"

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Until the yearning burdens,

I’ll try,

if breathing “hide tonight” defines your pleas to stay,

to endure another day without appearing alone …

… without you to rely on,

to deny I’m the reason i fail to appear appeased

whispering

“deny,

despite the failures overcome,

that a similar kiss could distract me”

preceding

“because … I love you”


Copyright © 2009 by Orlando G Gonzales III

from my collection

“Saldado Instrúyete”


Visit my blog for further selections from recent poetry collections.

© 2010 Orlando G Gonzales III


Author's Note

Orlando G Gonzales III
"Interpretations are always welcome"

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It makes me think its maybe about a forbidden love. Almost as if one of them is cheating on their spouse and their lover falls for them. I like it a lot. Few words making many details. Perfect!

Posted 9 Years Ago


This has the feel of an secret affair. "until the yearning burdens,
i'll try,
if breathing "hide tonight" defines your pleas to stay,"


These lines led me to that conclusion, along with the rest of the poem.

I really liked this
Well done
Raker

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Orlando G Gonzales III
Orlando G Gonzales III

Los Angeles, CA



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Orlando G Gonzales III is the author of over 20 collections of poetry, including "Untitled" & "M". His highly anticipated forthcoming collection, "Saldado Instrúyete" will be available in Dec.. more..

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