I'd Like To Die

I want to die,

I cannot survive,

a year without you.

I will not hide,

The feelings I have inside,

about you.

I told you how I felt,

but you didn't feel that way as well,

You pushed me out the door,

What was my love for?

I'd like to die,

I cannot survive,

a month without you.

And Why won't you help me?

I'm on my knees,

begging please,

Just...Take me away.

Please just end it right here,

My future isn't very clear,

Just slit my throat and run away

The faster it is, the less the pain.

I just wanna say

I love you,

I wish you'd love me too

But just know i'll be beyond the sky,

Wishing you to find a wife,

who you'll love till the end of time.

But right now,

I'd Just Like To Die.

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Powerfully emotional. A bit dramatic, but well written. Lydi**

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Thank you ;)

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it runs too much at times, but surprisingly good! thank you for sharing.

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ok thanks for the feedback

[WritingGirl12]

Very detailed amazing, great job