Flowers

The very first time, I put pen to paper this is what come out... Yes, this is my very first poem ever. jkb

Flowers


So many places so many faces that
I will never know
But that's the way things seem to go
The earth keeps turning and the sun
keeps burning
And the flowers all will grow

 

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Reviews

[Bryce Simonds]

Finally, on page 39, I find it. I saw your youtube video with you reading flowers, and I liked it, so I went through 39 pages to find it, just to review it, haha. Anyway, very first poem? Wow, that's amazing for a very first poem. The punctuation could use some work, but I have a feeling because it is your first work, you don't want to change it any. At least, that's how I feel about my first works; reviews on it are nice, but I don't want to change it, I keep it the way it is to look back on it to see how I've grown as a writer. Oh, I'm sorry, I seem to be babbling a bit. This was a very good poem, and I enjoyed you reading it. Keep up the good work son!
-Bryce

[SM Davis]

James, I'm not sure what to say about this. The depth of this piece is furthered by it's succinctness (is that even a word??) LOL At any rate, this piece is very nice, and I think it's perfect for the contest you've entered it for. (That's how I saw you wrote it)

Nicely done...and your style shines through once again.

[Kara Emily Krantz]

dfaljfdkajsd;jfa;j;!!!

yes yes yes this is wonderfuL! the fact that you had such a lovely impact in so few lines, is impressive. :)

it flowed perfectly.

it is basically perfect. :)

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Short, sweet and to the point. Good work.

[Shelly Wiseberg]

Life goes on nice poem,Shell

[Lex]

Nice. good write, nice to see your writing again.

[Andromeda]

love it!