Love's Promise

Love's Promise

A Poem by James K. Blaylock
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Written for the "Please Explain! 3" contest.

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Love's Promise

 

holding on

so tightly,

 

they'd promise

their love...

 

as the

sun witnessed

 

5-20-08

© 2008 James K. Blaylock


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This sounds like wedding vows to me, James. Sweet! Beautiful. Brings back memories of my son's wedding! :-)

Posted 15 Years Ago


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This makes the heart explode with sunshine lol...no other way to explain the feeling it gives me.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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An ever reborn witness to Love. a wonderful write with minimal words yet huge expression. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Short and sweet..The sun witnessed and so did the SON..that is what makes love so wonderful..God bless..Valentine

Posted 15 Years Ago


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OMG. The last two lines were fantastical. Where do come up with these little things? I love it. Love what you did with the picture. Thanks for entering this into the contest!
KH

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James K. Blaylock
James K. Blaylock

Tyler, TX



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Hi, I'm James K. Blaylock and I'm a poet/writer. I'm 39, and I live in Texas. I was born and raised here. I have been writing now for 13 years and I've been blessed to be published a number of times. .. more..

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