The Rose on the Tor

Oh how she wishes she were that crimson red rose,

That dazzles the eyes and tickles the nose.

Beauty and danger, an amalgam of two,

Mystery is hidden within its warm hue.

She knows it holds secrets, and wants nothing more,

Than to discover the meaning of this rose on the tor.

Reviews

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on your great winning poem

[Muhammad]

I agree with Sean Allen :O

[Sasha]

~ this is such a lovely capture, D
you paint a beautifully haunting image
that will stay with me long after the reading
lovely rhythm and rhyme
*hugs*
Sasha xx

[Tears Forgotten]

Very deep and unique style... love it

[Jessica Smith]

Loved it!

[Sean Allen]

This brings many possible thoughts to mind all of which I am sure are wrong!

[d. c. smith]

yer best.

[Legion]

Looking deeply can often sweep one away. A wonderfully short piece. Enigma. Love it. Bravo.