An Unexpected Surprise

An Unexpected Surprise

A Poem by D. Pesek

I once met a woman at a bar.

She had looks that were far above par.

A possible soul mate?

Oh I thought she was great.

Til I found out she lived in her car.

© 2009 D. Pesek


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haha, is this supposed to be a limerick, my friend?

It's quick, short, to-the-point, and a tad humorous....

though, it does get me wondering: why is this woman judged on her socioeconomic class situation (b/c she obviously is, since she is dismissed (even though first judged by her beauty) b/c the speaker finds out she "lives in her car", thus alluding to a "poor" person) ?

It's an interesting lil piece of social commentary...and *insight*, if you will, into this particular speaker.

Thanks for sharing :)
~Jess

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Nice little piece of humour.

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is funny! I love it :]

Posted 9 Years Ago


haha, this great :)
funny, short, and to the point.
good jobb :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hey, i support living in cars, myself.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

As long as it wasn't your car, LOL

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You nailed it son. Keep it up!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.



~ oh now this is a great Limerick, D
can tell you have a wickedly warped sense of humour...he he
an insightful piece that speaks volumes of the human condition
*hugs*
Sasha xx

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow.....so...did you move in... j/k.

I love this..short sweet and to the point...not to mention pretty funnee!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Very good. It made me smile. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

haha, is this supposed to be a limerick, my friend?

It's quick, short, to-the-point, and a tad humorous....

though, it does get me wondering: why is this woman judged on her socioeconomic class situation (b/c she obviously is, since she is dismissed (even though first judged by her beauty) b/c the speaker finds out she "lives in her car", thus alluding to a "poor" person) ?

It's an interesting lil piece of social commentary...and *insight*, if you will, into this particular speaker.

Thanks for sharing :)
~Jess

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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